4 pages of Rebecca
Last night I finished rewriting four pages of The Phoenix Project dealing with the origin of Rebecca, one of the main characters of the first act. She was outlined already, but the original draft flowed too quick. The text was dry and amateurish. These new four pages are denser and definitely more to my liking, but I still have to link the last paragraph to the end of that section, in which I recount how she became a worthy member of ODIN.…
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